Rough Cut and feedback

I compiled the rough cut together to show our teacher how our filming went although unfinished I thought it would be a good idea of what to expect and if there were any concerns at this early stage of editing. She was very pleased with the editing and very much liked the idea and the ending her only concerns were that the editing required more syncing when the base line kicks in, also some more POV editing styles for example some blurs etc which i agree with and will include into the final edit.

My workmate Matthew Maunder also observed the footage he said that the man who apporaches the door needs to seen walking up to the door rather than a cut of the man just there, i have two choices either i rotorscope the man and apply a very harsh colour correction to make him stand out more or i just extend the footage to allow the man appearing however this would mean extening the song, Matthew Maunder advised i extend the cut.

Written By Matthew Oliver

Rough Cut from Matthew Oliver on Vimeo.

We also received some audience feedback